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TBNE part 7

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            Jayfeather watched as Swiftpaw touched noses with Brightheart. Swiftpaw spoke in a strong tone. "With this life I give you Courage. Use it well to keep going even when times are rough." Brightheart's eye flew open with shock, and she began to tremble. Jayfeather searched her emotions, and was nearly knocked over by a huge wave of pain. Searing, excrutiating pain. Jayfeather could see huge brown and black dogs coming at him. Yet he felt courage too, the courage of a leader, the courage of a lion, racing through her bloodstream. Shuddering, he exited her thoughts. This ceremony was too powerful for him to endure. This pain was reserved for Brightheart alone. He saw that Brightheart's eye was glazed over, and was wide open in terror. Her fur was on end. Then the light returned to Brightheart's eye, and her fur began to lay flat. Swiftpaw muttered something, then turned and left.
            The next cat that stepped up to Brightheart was familiar to Jayfeather's eyes. He was a huge white male with gentle amber eyes. It was Whitestorm, former ThunderClan deputy. Brightheart gasped. "Whitestorm!" Whitestorm let out a rusty purr. "Welcome, my apprentice. I have been watching you, and I am proud." He touched noses to his former apprentice and murmered "With this life I give you Loyalty. Use it well to follow the warrior code, and to follow the will of your Clanmates." Brightheart stiffened slightly, and her eye glazed over. Jayfeather didn't enter her mind again, but pain was coming off of her in waves. Jayfeather shivered. Brightheart's fur began to rise in pain.
            Brightheart's eye focused once more, and she stared at Whitestorm. Whitestorm turned away and returned to the ranks of StarClan.
            Another cat stepped forward. This cat was a golden tabby with kind green eyes. Jayfeather had never seen this cat before, but the scent told him that he had met this cat in the waking world. This was Thornclaw, who had died in the battle. Brightheart gasped. Thornclaw touched his nose to his sister's and muttered "With this life I give you Fierocity in Battle. Use it well to defend your clan at all costs." Brightheart let out a small squeak, and her eye glazed. Jayfeather was transfixed. Brightheart had to be in so much pain, but the squeak was the only noise she had let out, the only sign of pain. Jayfeather was impressed.
Who do you think will give her the rest of her lives? Ha ha. I killed off Thornclaw.
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Firestarrocks9's avatar
AW! Poor Thornclaw!