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43.Your Obedient Servant - Bluefur and Thistleclaw

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THISTLECLAW

How does Hamilton
An arrogant
Immigrant, orphan
Bastard, whoreson

Somehow endorse
Thomas Jefferson, his enemy
A man he’s despised since the beginning
Just to keep me from winning?

I wanna be in the room where it happens
The room where it happens
The room where it happens
You’ve kept me from
The room where it happens
For the last time

Dear Alexander

I am slow to anger
But I toe the line
As I reckon with the effects
Of your life on mine

I look back on where I failed
And in every place I checked
The only common thread
Has been your disrespect

Now you call me amoral
A dangerous disgrace
If you’ve got something to say
Name a time and place
Face to face

I have the honor to be your obedient servant
A dot Burr

BLUEFUR

Mr. Vice President

I am not the reason no one trusts you
No one knows what you believe
I will not equivocate on my opinion
I have always worn it on my sleeve

Even if I said what you think I said
You would need to cite a more specific grievance
Here’s an itemized list of thirty years of disagreements

THISTLECLAW

Sweet Jesus

BLUEFUR

Hey, I have not been shy
I am just a guy in the public eye
Tryin’ to do my best for our republic
I don’t wanna fight
But I won’t apologize for doing what’s right

I have the honor to be your obedient servant
A dot Ham

THISTLECLAW

Careful how you proceed, good man
Intemperate indeed, good man
Answer for the accusations I lay at your feet or
Prepare to bleed, good man

BLUEFUR

Burr, your grievance is legitimate
I stand by what I said, every bit of it
You stand only for yourself
It’s what you do
I can’t apologize because it’s true

THISTLECLAW

Then stand, Alexander
Weehawken. Dawn
Guns drawn

BLUEFUR

You’re on

BOTH

I have the honor to be your obedient servant

BLUEFUR

A dot Ham

THISTLECLAW

A dot Burr



...sooooooo, guess who finally discovered Hamilton? :P

Yeah, the last few days/weeks have been spent becoming deeply, deeply obsessed with Hamilton, as I tend to do when I find something new that I really like. :P Actually, I've only listened to seven songs so far, so I haven't listened to all of it yet. I'm waiting until finals are over to download all of the songs. :P

This is actually the first song I heard from Hamilton, and I first found it because of a Tigerclaw and Fireheart MAP planning video to this song. So once again Warriors is changing my life. :P Anyway, I've been listening to these songs and loving them and finding new Warriors videos to these songs. I've found two videos to Obedient Servant so far, one with Tigerclaw and Fireheart, and one with Clear Sky and Gray Wing. Those are both great pairings to go with this song, and I greatly look forward to them being completed so I can watch them. :D

But the other day, I realized that there's a pair in the books that fits the song even better, at least in my opinion, who no one was making a video for or drew any fanart for. And since I'm far too lazy these days to make a whole video, a bit of fanart is what I did. ^^ And that pair is, of course, Bluefur and Thistleclaw. It really seems to fit them perfectly. Thistleclaw is ambitious for ambition's sake, it seems to me, not really out of a want to help people, which contrasts Bluefur wanting to keep ThunderClan safe and do her best for them, which fits with Burr and Hamilton in this song. And Bluefur did her best to manipulate events to keep Thistleclaw from power, which also works for Burr's accusations in this song. The only thing that doesn't really fit is the challenge to duel, since Thistleclaw never challenged Bluestar to any kind of fight, but ah well, I still think this song really fits them. This would take place right after Bluefur becomes deputy - Thistleclaw doesn't know about her giving up her kits in order to stop him from being deputy, but he's furious anyway, and probably thinks Bluefur talked to Sunstar in order to dissuade him from making Thistleclaw deputy.

I'm pretty proud of how this turned out. Bluefur's pose with her head brought up sharply like that took some referencing and tweaking, but I'm pretty happy with the end result. I'm not totally satisfied with the shading or with Thistleclaw's angry glare, but overall I'm pretty happy with it. I tried to make the background resemble the color of the Hamilton logo. :P And yeah, I didn't draw scars on either of them. I'll say it's because they're young and haven't gotten quite as visibly scarred yet, buuuuuuuuut mostly it's because I'm lazy. :P </p>
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Aaaaahhhhhhh!!! HAMILTON! If you like Hamilton a LOT, check out HamiltonTrash0w0 by Maddoggoborks4life